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Ragnarok - pt 1 by ~The-F-Key:iconThe-F-Key:





Ragnarok
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this is based on a dream I had a few years ago it was brought back by a question my little brother asked me about three hours ago, the time is 7:37 on the seventh of June, I’m starting before the begging of the dream and forwarding time seven years, the question?
What happens after you die? This was from my six-year-old brother

Enjoy this little fantasy of mine… and just so you know like all works of mine it contains romance, I can’t seem to keep it out of my writing so once aging Enjoy
– Adam  




hush little baby don’t say a word
and never mind that noise you heard
It’s just the beasts under your bed
In your closet in your head – enter sandman by metallica



One for sorrow the old magpie trick, solo because other magpies don’t trust them. There are beasts in your closet and under the bed; there are things that go bump in the night
Daemons, devils call them what you will, evil


If a white feather falls near you it means your guardian angel is near, things must go bump back but we don’t hide in your closet or under your bed, we over look you
Angels, servants of god call us what you will, good



“Okay, what came first the chicken or the egg” my science teacher, Dr.holmes asked the class, trying to prove a point
“Chicken, what lays else the eggs?” Liat said to me phrasing it like a question
“What did the chicken hatch from?” I replied to her putting my hand up to answer a circular question, which I found had a square edge
“Adam” he sighed, “this question has no answer,” he said to me and the class laughed
“Wrong again, evolution is the answer, the chicken is a mutant form of another bird but successfully mated with a non-mutant form, the chicken hatched from a non-chicken egg, if you see my logic” I said to him, making him stare at me with his jaw hanging limply, score one me
“How did he work that out?” Deborah asked Liat, those two girls weren’t too bright academically

little did I know my fate, was tied to this girl, this shard of innocence
emphasis on fate

“I don’t know” she replied
“I hate to say this, but I think you’re right” my teacher replied, his bald head shining in the light “dare I say it I admire your logic. Okay, now I’ve been proven wrong in another argument, you’re homework is to reason why circular questions should remain unanswered” he said as we packed our books away time for break then English
“Adam” Liat asked me from below, she was a short EXTREMELY cute girl when I say extremely I mean she has a seven in ten chance of being raped by a police officer in a dark alley kind of cute
“Yep” I replied
“Can you help me with the science homework?” she asked using her big brown eyes to her advantage, she didn’t have to use the eyes on me
“Yeah, can you meet me at the library at lunch, we got English next so you can catch me at the door if I forget” I replied smiling
“Alright then” she said with a perfect grin that she wore the whole time. She then skipped off like she was in a field of daises with pink butterflies would follow her around
“Waddup?” Daniel called to me from down the hall
“Who the hell says waddup anymore?” I said to my friend who seemed to be born then put on ‘the rack*’                           *Victorian torture; see wikipedia.org for details
“Fine, what’s down?” he replied
“Very funny ass hole” I said looking up
“You playin’ footie today?” he asked holding up a football
“Got nothin’ better to do” I replied “but its too early for that kind of movement” I added restraining a yawn
“Whatever, speak at lunch” he said and began on his way
“Busy at lunch with Liat” I replied, then smacked my forehead
“At least save it till after school” he replied
“I’m helping her with homework” I replied
“Human biology?” he asked
“Yea—NO!” I barked, “Remind me who you’re going out with?” I asked him
“Jen—“ before he could finish the name I was rolling on the floor in tears
“What’s wrong with going out with her?” he asked bewildered
“Him” I corrected
“SHUT UP!” he shouted and kicked my ribs as I laughed even harder
I calmed down eventually
“Whatever, I’ll talk to you on msn later, I’m gonna be late!” I said and left
“Break only just started!” he shouted back confused
“You know me!” I replied and ran, I had the reputation for having the worst luck known to mankind, I’m surprised my nickname wasn’t jinx

I’ll elaborate; I would be the guy who would get struck by lightning on a clear blue sky mid summer, and then get hit by the ambulance sent to help me

Anyway
You guessed it; my class had gone in, about fifteen minuets early
“Sorry I’m early,” I said as I barged in and took my seat, the lesson resumed around me I paid no attention, Dr.jekyl and Mr.Hyde doesn’t really appeal to me
The words ‘grouped work’ leapt out at me, my attention was held
“Groups of three” she said, immediately Liat and Deb—wait, oh never mind they are in my class thought they weren’t… never mind
“We want someone clever” Liat said and scanned the room full of illiterate idiots
“Adam?” Deborah said and I flinched
“Yeah” Liat agreed and they walked over to me… shit, if she uses bambi eyes I’m screwed. I’m screwed



I levelled the launcher at the training institute they can’t be allowed to get any more out of there, I pulled the trigger and three aerial torpedoes flew at the building shattering the glass and removing the everything above it, my tail swished in delight
“Target destroyed,” I said into a glass ball filled with red mist
“What do you mean? It’s untouched” a voice, reported, the red mist vibrated and swirled with every syllable
Huh?
“You shot the glowing blue building right?” he asked, what blue building?
“There isn’t one” I replied
“Fool” the voice said, and pink-yellow flames engulfed me



But before her mouth could open a shape came through the window, a black cylinder with four fins, followed by two others The room got ignited in overlapping yellow and orange fireballs


Well crap,

I know this really isn’t the time to discuss this but I just have to ask this;
What colour does a smurf go when you choke it?

Where was I? Oh yeah


I bolted upright, since when did my room glow blue?
Or when did I share it with my English class?
Were we?..
“Dead?” a voice asked mentally and audibly “yes and no, I stopped you, from passing onto judgement, all thirty of you” the voice said
“I’m presuming you’re ‘god’ then” I said
“Yes, I am god” it replied, well I suppose I was meant to be awestruck
“So what happens now? I presume you stopped us for a reason” I said to god, the class looked at me like I was mad
“Truth is the material world is in trouble, daemons are breaking through the barrier between the worlds, the thirty of you are going to stop them” god said, not quite what I was expecting but…
“How? We’re just normal kids” Deborah replied
“I can change things here in the immaterial worlds, its only in the material world I have limited effects” it replied
“Meaning?” I asked
“You’re going to combat them as angels, in pairs, which I have decided according to recent behaviour, compatibility and intelligence” he said “but know I only have a decent amount of control in the material world in Israel so that’s where you’ll resurrect”

Feck, I’ve never been to Israel and I don’t speak ivrit

“Now know your pairings,” he said and a name sounded through my head,

Liat

Could have been worse, she was born in Israel and we got along,
“Now go” god commanded, and everything seemed to spiral, no time to get to terms with things, just go

I saw the ground very close, closing very fast
OOF! I grunted as I landed face first

Liat landed on top of me, crushing my… wings? She was surprisingly light
I suppose I shouldn’t be surprised, we were…angels…after all, strange saying that, but she was also slightly chubby, not fat, more cuddly

She got up groaning
“Ow” she groaned out
“You okay?” I asked her
“Yeah, you?” she replied
“Other than tasting dirt and being crushed between you and the ground, yeah I’m fine” I replied getting up and dusting myself off, I had simple clothes on a grey tracksuit with a white Tee
Liat was wearing a white skirt and a white tee, I looked around the rest of the thirty were wearing the same kinda stuff
A thought struck me that I didn’t like
“YO! I just had a thought” I yelled to the crowd of people “certain things that we might do will affect our public image and all of that,” they began to mumble to each other “so don’t do anything stupid that will have a public affect without everyone’s approval, unless its guaranteed to be positive, like stopping someone being hit by a truck, speaking of which, everyone got everyone else’s number?”
“No” came back the general reply,
“Get them if you’re about to be screwed over by daemons, you might want to get some help,” I said, at that every one began to flurry about to get each other’s, mobile number. Then we all said our temporary goodbyes and went our separate ways in our pairs


“Now what?” she asked, THAT good question
“I suppose we just wait to encounter them, but I want to go home to say my goodbyes, but we have to see the sights first, we’re in Israel!” I exclaimed “another thing I think we should do is learn to fly, we have wings” I said
“Could we ask god?” Liat asked me
“I hope so, lets ask at the kotel, that’s a holy place, if there’s any chance of contacting him anywhere its there” I suggested, so we began our journey north from the Negev
©2008-2009 ~The-F-Key
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Author's Comments

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thank you come again

and yes i did borrow the weapons from Kid Icarus and no i dont give a :poo:

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:iconlycan-rising:
okay. Random as hell, and the launcher guy seems to have no point there. The most random thing that could have possibly happened in a story, but nonetheless, a good start. But lets see how you go from there. my only query is that only adam seems to say anything. no-one else says a word to comment on god or the fact they were dead...which from a bunch of teens doesn't sound right. either way, nice.

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Horn broken, watch for finger.
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dude, its god, you don't speak like that unless you're at the level of Adamness i have aquired

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=The-Mighty-Badger - my mum, you have to love her, and her gallery
*Dear-Dire-Heart - my little sister, i love her to death and back, along with her poems and songs
*Nyctra - my big sister, i love her to death, just stare at her gallery in awe
:icondear-dire-heart:
*rolls up sleaves again*
Okeys, lets get reading
*reads*...*pauses* Nice theory on the chicken and the egg
*reads*...*pauses* 7/10 of being raped by a police officer in a dark alley...NICE
*reads on*...*pauses*Hey! pink butterflys are my thing...sept i dont like pink...I prefer purple...never mind
*reads on*...*snickers* human biology
*reads on*...*pauses* That sounds like pretty bad luck XD
*reads on*...*snickers*...nice smurf joke
*reads on*..."How can we we're only kids" - To me thats the most annyoing sentence in the world
*reads on*...Angels have cell phones?? :giggle:
:clap:

AWSOME! I LOVE IT! MAGNIFICENT! BRILLIANT! INGENIOUS! :D
Oh and sorry bout the long comment ^^

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The shadow proves the sun shines

*Nyctra My Nykitty sister whom I love to bits.
~TheChocolateTiger My heart, my soul, my reason for living. I love you darling.
:iconthe-f-key:
THANKIES! *extreme :hug:*
dont be sorry

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=The-Mighty-Badger - my mum, you have to love her, and her gallery
*Dear-Dire-Heart - my little sister, i love her to death and back, along with her poems and songs
*Nyctra - my big sister, i love her to death, just stare at her gallery in awe
:icontheonlysword:
where the fuck is this going (in english that means good start)
this needs a guy with a flaming sword...wait a moment that means...
PICK ME ME ME MEMEMEMEMEMEMEMEME
*sigh*

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The most stupid story since the hitchhikers guide to the galaxy has found the internet
:[link]
Where there are no such things as heroes
[link]
:iconlycan-rising:
aka. act first and wonder if jumping off that cliff really was a good idea in mid air? oh, by the way, why ragnarok (i think it means: madness...fitting)

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Horn broken, watch for finger.
:iconthe-f-key:
im considering giving the main antagonist a flaming sword, or maybe...
stephen if you were i girl, i would e-kiss you you gave me an idea

bullshit i wouldn't kiss you if you were female and looked like katie price and we were both drunk

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=The-Mighty-Badger - my mum, you have to love her, and her gallery
*Dear-Dire-Heart - my little sister, i love her to death and back, along with her poems and songs
*Nyctra - my big sister, i love her to death, just stare at her gallery in awe
:iconthe-f-key:
because, according to norse, legend it was when the world would freeze over and fire would light the sky and all normal people would take up arms to free their planet

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=The-Mighty-Badger - my mum, you have to love her, and her gallery
*Dear-Dire-Heart - my little sister, i love her to death and back, along with her poems and songs
*Nyctra - my big sister, i love her to death, just stare at her gallery in awe
:iconlycan-rising:
emphesis on normal XD. and from dictionary.com, it says: "in Norse mythology, the last battle of the world, in which gods and men will be destroyed by monsters and darkness". adam has alot to live up to obviously. however, if it gives you any ideas, god is on a totally different plane to humans, and is not affected physically. So if the first battle takes place on earth.....

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Horn broken, watch for finger.
:iconthe-f-key:
josh, i just took the name, calm it!

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=The-Mighty-Badger - my mum, you have to love her, and her gallery
*Dear-Dire-Heart - my little sister, i love her to death and back, along with her poems and songs
*Nyctra - my big sister, i love her to death, just stare at her gallery in awe

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